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Words of Pain

You put me through all this torture
All this pain and all this misery
I wonít show my heartbroken tears
You can see that Iím hurt inside
You can see my wrist bleeding
I am dying inside because of you
I can only see red and black
The knife gleams with my blood
The rope gets tighter around my neck
I hate this but my heart says I must
A stake is piercing my heart
I try so hard to gain your love
All I get is a deadly answer
I am going insane because of you
Every time I hear your name
I lose control and I am broken
My sanity becomes lost
I am losing my mind
And I am at a loss of words
These words will always remain unsaid
This is Just an experiment I was trying out.... it turned out better than i thought... Tell me what you think and If you want, if yopu give me some random words, i could do a poem like this for you. (I am really bored so...) Just in case you are wondering what words I used to inspire this poem... they are: torture, pain, misery, tears, heartbroken, hurt, bleeding, dying, red, black, knife, rope, hate, heart, stake, love, deadly, insane, name, control, broken, lost, losing, loss, and unsaid. If you look close enough, you will realize that the words go in order..... Hope you like it!!
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bubblecheeks13 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013
true true
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Cunt-dracula Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2010
***EMO ALERT!***
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ashwagalkaabi Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
w0o00ow
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bacondog Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
cool, is it based on you or hypethetical?
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Broken-Heart6 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2009
This was based on a time in my life.
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bacondog Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
oh, well I hope it got better, I love this peice by the way!
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Broken-Heart6 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009
It did. and thank you ^_^
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bacondog Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
ur welcome
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publicenemy009 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2009
i like this alot. its a little dark but it gives it a more real feel to it

you should check out some of mine, if you have time, i would love to know what you think
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FireCatKirara Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2008
Wow. I like it ^^
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